Only you I need

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For every moment I think of you
For every thought, memory
For every tear for every moment of longing

My tears could quench an inferno
But my own grows on
My fiery flames of need, desire grows on

I need you more, I want you more
You alone can quench my flames
Only you I need to hold

Our time apart is a living Hell
Time spent together is Heaven on earth
Only you can really make me smile

You make me whole
I feel completed
No longer alone, just you I need

No longer alone, forever with you
No longer alone I have to feel
Together I hope forever we'll be

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erectus123erectus123about 11 years ago
too many trite images*, cunt-ry western? ( which I love)

it is cute and trite and if Mindy had not shot herself she could sing it, perhaps too personal for an audience, give us something better, I know if you try you can do it.

If this is too harsh I'm sorry, nothing personal here, I hope not to offend.

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"My tears could quench an inferno

My fiery flames of need

You alone can quench my flames

a living Hell

Heaven on earth

Only you can really make me smile

You make me whole

I feel completed "