Orange Lady

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Inspired by reading Syndra Lynns’ Orange Glow
whilst giving the Orange Lady a makeover prior to a show.


Oh Allis B Allis B, you’re the best of Allis C’s mighty children,
though well past sixty now you’re still my girl.
I’m intimately well acquainted with your body orange painted,
twenty horsepower, big behind and just a ton.

I pull your crank quite slowly,
turn you over, fire you up.
Protest, misfire, splutter, your engine starts to stutter
and then begins to putter into life.

Your fixed position throttle at nine hundred RPM,
we throb gently in parade around the ground.
I sit behind, astride you, with love and pride I guide you,
adulation, gasps of wonder from the crowd.

Women at the show ignore you, know they’re beaten, can’t compete
with a lady who has seen them off before.
But their menfolk touch you, wistful, with a longing quiet and wishful
and jealous in their reverential awe.

Allis Chalmers Model B 1942.

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LannaLaceLannaLacealmost 2 years ago

Excellent!!... I do have a thing for tractors ...as much as the other soft satin things in life!

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Which goes to show, there's poetry in everything.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Tractors

Even though in a past life I was a John Deere man, It was fun to reminesce. Allis Chalmers were always around. How lovely that someone has written a poem about them. Very enjoyable!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
You sucked me in!

Verra, verra nice, Ishtat! VUUUUNDUHFUL!

-- Kate (bennmorland85 -- can't remember the password)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Very clever!

Thanks, Ishtat.

Flyguy

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnabout 19 years ago
High five!

I love this in so many ways! First of all, my husband hates poetry, but loves tractors. He has never read Orange Glow, but I read this to him and he flipped. Oh, what a riot. He loved it. We both give it a five.

Secondly, and sadly, I knew what you were talking about in the very first line. Side effect of living with a tractor freak, um...fanatic.

Very sensual. In an odd, greasy sort of way.

~Syn

WickedEveWickedEveabout 19 years ago
wonderful poem

Reminds me of the tractors we have at the yearly fair around here. I like how you brought her to life in this poem.

duckiesmutduckiesmutabout 19 years ago
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