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Click hereI'll show you the way down papaya lane,
to the place where the mangos grow,
then lead you astray in our little grass shack,
at the edge of a coconut grove.
We'll dance in the light of the tropical sun
to the music of butterfly wings,
as they dip their tongues in deep nectar wells,
making wax-petalled orchid blooms sing.
Come hula with me; sway those luscious hips,
in that sinuous way you dance.
Twisting your arms, in hypnotic swirls,
spin a libidinous trance.
Sweet lover of mine, I cannot deny,
the need that your presence inspires,
in my secret place of flower-lipped dew,
grown steamy in dark-eyed fires.
Now, lead me astray in our little grass shack
with your kisses of nectar-sweet wine,
and when the moon glints off the waves of the bay,
I'll love you and make you mine.
A charming short poem but it is unlikely to supplant Eisenberg's "Basic Tropical Botany". Deduction made because with one or two very minor adjustments it could scan rather better.
off the printed page! Superb, and I don't think there are too many adjectives. The ones that are included are appropriately descriptive!!
though there are sections too abundant with adjectives. Honestly, a few less would be an improvement, in my opinion. By the way, the title is wonderful and the poem left me content.
when I read this early this morning...yes, excellent poem, enjoyed it very much :)
wow what a poem~
I really can't figure why this comment sections not riddled with remarks....honest this is poem is awesome...well three thumbs up champagne and two with nails...grion