- Erotic Poetry
- Paradelle
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Shoving my hatred deeper and deeper
Shoving my hatred deeper and deeper
I pull away from my sanctuary
I pull away from my sanctuary
My sanctuary deeper, shoving deeper
I pull the hatred away and
Peel my rose petals from your lips
Peel my rose petals from your lips
I leave the lies to linger in you
I leave the lies to linger in you
Peel the lies from your rose to linger
in my petals, leaving you
alone in your death
Alone in your death
To drown in the silence that stagnates
To drown in the silence that stagnates
To drown alone in your silence in
the death that stagnates
Shoving your lips in my petals
to linger alone in my rose
peel away from the hatred that stagnates deeper,
I pull deeper leaving your lies to silence
The death....The sanctuary...
to drown in you.
- COMMENTS
SweetAvantGardeover 13 years agoAuthorIt's a form poem. Not to everyone's liking, but it is a very specific form, called a Paradelle. Sorry if you were unable to follow it.
twelveooneover 13 years agoI hate it
I hate it
must be something you wrote
must be something you wrote
not once
not once
but twice
bonus points for the experiment
