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- Pink Rose (Senryu-Hybrid)
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Click hereBlushing soft pink rose
Raining mist draws her downward
Weeping fragile tears
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normal jeanalmost 17 years agothe imagery here
is tactile and very visual. I do not know much about a senryu, but I am wondering about the number of modifiers in your first line, it seems like you could lose the word "soft" unless it is required for syllable count or some other reason.
I did enjoy the poem, good work :)
NJ
