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byjavawarrior©

The strongest man in the world
Knelt before the red curtain
And prayed

His salvation veiled behind
Bloodstained sheets like grape-skin

Fatal fig
Empty tomb
Cindered city

The history of mankind
Beyond the falling red cloak

Revealed!

A tear of blue flame falls fast
And glows dim in the mirror's frame

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by javawarrior07/26/12

Not a misinterpretation at all...

...but an interpretation. The Red Curtain is a good metaphor it would seem, because it has a different meaning in different contexts. What I love about poetry is the myriad interpretations that are possiblemore...

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by Ashesh907/26/12

JavaW

Unfortunately whenever the words "Red Curtain" are used our generation brought up durin the Cold War (which was particularly warm here in India ) would in Dullesian conditioned sensibilities associatemore...

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by javawarrior07/25/12

The Red Curtain...

...is actually the Holy of Holies. At least, that was my intent. I would love to hear your interpretation though. Perhaps shattered faith in the proletarian revolution?

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by Ashesh907/15/12

Red curtain would mean...

The erstwhile Iron Curtain ?

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by tazz31707/15/12

WHILE A COMET SOARS THROUGH THE OZONE

scaring those who dont believe, TK U MLJ LV NV

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