- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Pleasure and Pain ~ for Whom?
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Click herePleasure and Pain ~ for Whom?
Sweet and firm,
she ties spiritual and physical;
with garb to suit
the roles they aspire.
Haughty facade
masks depths never fathomed;
of caring and passion
fierily unleashed.
Demands for submissions undreamt,
a nightmare not, to souls of strength;
reality's incongruity to the image ~ unseen,
with eyes' questing pleas little seen.
In silence she speaks volumes
of steel and leather;
of ties that bind;
love, care, trust,
and fulfillment without measure.
The pain of triumph, the joy of submission;
all that's possible, She shows
as two become one, and souls are branded
with roles deeply cherished.
And as breathing resumes, She inspires.
© Leon Brozyna 2005
- COMMENTS
SmoochingSamanthaover 17 years agoLoved it, you have true talent, one to aspire to. Thank you for sharing
XyJonahover 17 years agoYou were the first to leave a comment on my first submission. Tonight, I finally found time to read and contemplate your poetry.
To think that you found something in my work that you thought worthy of praise amazes me.
Thank you; I'm a fan.
xxxkaliaxxxover 17 years agoHello there,
You've been leaving some comments on my poetry so it was only fair that I check out your own work. I've been sitting here reading through a bunch of your poems and I'm quite impressed - you have a beautiful talent. I had to come back to this poem I enjoyed it so much.
--Kalia--
darkitudeover 17 years agoForgive the use of your line. It ensnared me where I live. Hats off. <blink> I was trained not to answer the door for solicitors. Do that some more and "we" may offer you some words to whet shared thirsts.
Wanton Vixxxenabout 18 years agoReading your words penned within this poem and the depth of feelings evoked was as if you had a virtual reality tour of My chambers during a scening. For someone who is admittedly foreign personally with the craft, you have drawn, with remarkable emotional clarity , from all five senses and have left this Domme shaking her non-blonde {laughin'} head in very impressed amazement!
As for the comments made concerning overuse of semi colons~ it is purely a matter of choice over commas~ nothing serious; nothing deadly {note the Queen of Semi Colons reigning over Her Land of Punctuation here}. Neither punctuation used would have marred the content of this poem, believe Me.{smile}
This was indeed a pleasure~ with NO pain~ to read!
Vixxx
sweet GA peachesover 18 years agotook my breath,
and then these..
these words..
"And as breathing resumes, She inspires".
....left me Awe'd.
this is the poetry that hearts feel
and hands cannot inscribe,
but ever so deeply the words go,
like the ink stained on parchment,
these I will remember..
your mark ,
left.
-sGp-
bluerainsover 18 years agoobservance placed in such language touches the HEART..of the crowd...smilin...with a sigh...blue
Jennifer Cover 18 years agoI really enjoyed your
poem hun, great word
choices and for me
it flowed just fine.
~ Jenn
(from the cluster fuck threads
and damn proud of it!)
1201 don't you mean the 'write' from the heart bunch?
Anonymousover 18 years agoOkay, well, fuck the semi-colon bullshit problem. It didn't cause any flow issues for me. If it did, I'd say so. But yes, they're incorrect. Your grammar is fine, and damn it, I cried. That's just me lately - going through a lot over here.
This was a very moving piece of WORK! THIS is poetry!
Thanks for sharing! You have talent!
My Erotic Taleover 18 years agoyour poem was mentioned in the thread
"New Poems Reviews"
thanks for the journey...Art~
