- Erotic Poetry
- porn poem
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Doctor,
I have this pain in my chest sometimes
and my heart will race
and my blood will pound in my ears
and I'll feel self-conscious
and exalted at the same time
and I can't suppress a smile
for hours afterwards
and it took a long time
for me to figure out what caused it
but I think it's you
and thinking about you
when you touch me down there
like you're touching me now.
Can you feel my racing heart
and the way my breasts tighten
and how I'm blushing
at the hungry looks you're giving me
and also blushing because I like it?
I like the way you touch me
and how you pet me and agitate me
and how you plunge your fingers into me
and when I slide off the examination table
and come down onto your erect cock
I like how you grip my bottom
and slam me into the table
quietly so the nurses won't hear
and how you rape my mouth with your tongue
the same tongue that tickles my nipples
and explores my neck.
I like how the freezing air and your freezing fingers
makes me cling to you even tighter
and makes your skin like a furnace.
And what makes it all even better
is knowing that it's wrong
and imagining the expressions
if someone walked in and saw you
buried in me, and me,
clinging to you and moaning in your ear.
- COMMENTS
KOLKOREabout 17 years agoJust in case, and let me get it out of the way ok? There is a song, which used to be quite popular in the 60’s its lyrics are very similar –not identical to this poem. I realize that the theme as it is is very ubiquitous; nevertheless, I had an instantaneous recognition. If winktwice have heard the song and was inspired by it it’s fine. The best thing to do in my opinion is to make a little comment saying that it was influenced or influenced by or inspired by X” Another option is that a secondary source have imitated that song and that secondary source inspired (knowing or not) with this poem. I am not alleging any wrong doing Just a word of advice as I mentioned above.
Btw, I don’t have yet the song’s name, but the memorable feature there was the strong Indian accent of the Doctor. Any one remembers?
Anonymousabout 17 years agoGeez, it makes me wish I was your doctor. I wish I had gone to medical school instead of majoring in English.
Oh, when is your next appointment? I shall look forward to what happens, then.
Amyfriendabout 17 years agoI liked it very much. But if I were you, I would try to do a little editing out of words like "and". Some could be done away with, and some can be substituted with another word.
Anonymousabout 17 years agoThe rhythm in this poem is something to behold. Quite fast paced.
Would improve upon the language in the poem. It feels a little stale and needs less emphasis on the telling but more on the showing.
The poem is also too long, imho, and would benefit from a trim.
Not a bad effort
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