- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Pure Bliss
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Click hereBright thoughts of you
fill my day,
Lighting the way,
To a connection so strong,
it could never be wrong.
Beautiful soul
Hidden inside-
guarded and shy
One look,
penetrating deep,
Reaching through,
finding you.
Tender touches,
genuine and true
Soft passionate kisses,
the sweet smell of you.
Butterfly flutters,
smiles abound.
Could this be love that I have just found?
- COMMENTS
Jennifer Calmost 19 years agoI liked the sentiment and
the flow was ok but it could
use a little tightening (in
my opinion.)
Good effort,
thanks.
~ J
Mia Moorealmost 19 years agolet us hope so and you may look for a new muse now :) decent effort at a tired subject. I bet you have more than this in you, go for it!!
