- Illustrated Poetry
- Purrfectly Perfect
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Oh to be Frisbee,
what a delight!
I'd sit on my ass
and take in all the sights.
To just relax on my back
and enjoy...
my Master's strong hands
or play with my toys.
I'd have the best foods,
the most wonderful snacks.
As he stroked my belly
and helped me relax.
When I purred...
oh the sounds I would make,
Would tell everybody
that I wasn't fake.
My legs would be
up in the air.
My thoughts ascended,
I wouldn't care.
For I would be lost
in the bliss don't you see
of being a cat;
Oh the life that would be!
- COMMENTS
payenbrantabout 9 years agoMuch too adorable....! Cheater! :-). Putting a cute kitty in there is just too much. Gotta rate it now. Rotten stinking...guh! Wish I had thought of it. Let it be a lesson to all who read this comment...
Never underestimate the power of cuteness!
Sincerely,
Payenbrant.
duddle146over 17 years agoThis clever poem takes a look at the life of a cat. The poet points to the advantages ~ the bliss ~ and reckons life as a cat wouldn't be all that bad.
Anonymousover 18 years agoVery well written Red, such humour yet so damned accurate for my cats too...
Anonymousover 18 years agoVery cute. Put a smile on my face, Red. THough, you always seem too. ;)
Anonymousover 18 years agoThis is cute and funny. I really enjoyed the poem.
I do believe some of the words could be reworded differently or better said, switched around in areas. I'm not one for fragments, but I still was able to understand, and get a nice chuckle. I love your sense of humor!
One example:
Oh to be Frisbee,
what a delight!
I'd sit on my ass
and take in all the sights.
Maybe:
To be a Frisbee
would be such a delight.
I'd sit on my ass,
and take in all the sights.
LeBrozover 18 years agoNow that's what a call
A purrfectly happy pussy
On the back relaxed
Purrfectly grinning.
