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abundance of will waning
weightless tug of worth
push pinning hopes
pining away
pulling - back and forth
through days free
falling through the wisp
per wants born naked
in dark nested need
full, filling the still life
less touch and go; story
dying before our berth
So deep that it may be bottomless. I found something new in each line every time I read it over again. At first, I thought that I was finding unintended meanings and effects but upon further readings, I think not--I'm finding very little of all that is there. I was particularly struck by the lines, "weightless tug of worth" and "dying before our berth" and the unjoined "wisp per."
I would call it more mercury than lead--shifting sinuously from meaning to meaning, depending on the temperature of the reader.
This is incredibly compact, dense I would even call it. I will have to read it many times to realize all I want in it.
Almost overwhelmingly compact language. It takes focus to follow. But damn, worth it.