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Remembered Snow

bydemure101©

Remembered snow's not cold and white. It's just
half-lights, half-shadows on an empty wall
and long-gone voices talking, and a hint
of what I thought was Christmas, green and red
in silent rooms, and right across the lawn
a line of footprints fading past the dawn.

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by Anonymous12/27/12

*****

Five.

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by PandoraGlitters12/18/12

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poem was mentioned in New Poems Recommendations.

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by SweetOblivion12/17/12

Agreed

entirely with Oneira's comment - an excellent verse

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by Anonymous12/16/12

REALITY IS NEVER THE SAME

as remberance. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by oneiria12/16/12

Wonderful

This is a very beautiful, subtle poem. Gave it a 5.

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