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sack
sack
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Rhyme rhyme rhyme rhyme rhyme rhyme rhyme!

Can Lime mime chime climb in prime time?
Who knows Boo slows foes grows toes hoes rose?

Did Mel fell pell mell in hell well, Nell tell?
Could cross Ross toss floss across moss?

Will plain sane Jane explain feign or gain?
Does ill Bill fill grill mill till or trill?

Might Gail wail fail rail sail trail or tail?
Would Lynn win sin or grin? She drin' gin agin?

Slim trim Tim him swim; Kim rim limb with vim
Fairy Mary Terry nary scary in dairy

Eve leave Steve Jeeve; grieve believe weave
Bob, rob mob, hob nob, lob slob, sob job

Tyke Mike Spike like hike bike trike alike
Morris Horace Doris Boris chorus for us

Fancy Nancy Clancy dancy man-see?
Lose muse rues news clues booze booze booze

Rhyme rhyme rhyme rhyme rhyme rhyme rhyme!

sack
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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Crazy Rhymes.

*laughing* Once more with gusto - Rhyme, Rhyme, Dime...oh well.

WickedEveWickedEveabout 19 years ago
I can make sense

of some of the lines and some of them I like:

Fairy Mary Terry nary scary in dairy

But this poem gives me a headache. lol

How's the law suit coming?

~hellbaby~~hellbaby~about 19 years ago
I think

I think you just put Dr. Suess out of a job!

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 19 years ago
*

I disagree with Crassner, shows some thought, but as a parody it eiher was too suble or vague, for me to catch it.

Bridget69Bridget69about 19 years ago
Tongue twister.

It was a very challenging poem to read, to say the least. A real speech exercise. LOL!

Jennifer CJennifer Cabout 19 years ago
Whats the big deal?

I liked the poem sack, obviously it's just a bit of fun, but a jaunty read none the less.

Wether poetry is serious or not, long or short, does not mean that the author hasn't put in any effort.

After reading Crassners comment I went to check out his/her submissions, there were none, I wonder why?!!

sacksackabout 19 years agoAuthor
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1. I didn't use a rhyming dictionary 2. Of course a parody, do you notice anything serious here? 3. Took much longer to write than most of my poems, not just a random list of rhyming words. Read it again!

CrassnerCrassnerabout 19 years ago
Somewhere

there's a rhyming dictionary who is writing up a plagiarism suit.

If it's a parody it's poorly done, and if it's not,as I said, anyone can copy a rhyming dictionary.

I suppose we'll have to argue whether it's poetry or art or even understood next.

Most of the poets here put a lot of thought and effort into their work.

This shows none at all

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