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Rise From Our Words

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All night conversations
by the fire.
Smoke fills the air,
thoughts rise from our words.

In our silences
we search for dry wood
to burn.

Forgetting what
we’re looking for,
we become the fire.

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sweet GA peachessweet GA peachesover 18 years ago
THIS .......

left me with much

.....FIRE.....

wonderful creativity

you have here,

among your branches !

burn ... burn ...

-sGp-

LuciousBi-Writes4ULuciousBi-Writes4Uover 18 years ago
nice!!

loved it! great job buddy!

hugs and kisses,

T

~hellbaby~~hellbaby~almost 19 years ago
Smoldering Images

The subtlety of the campsite sets the mood for that last line that hits like a gas can into the fire. I guess the tent will be rockin. I do agree that I wish it were longer.Great poem

Honey123Honey123almost 19 years ago
Nice!

See, this poem is really erotic in it's very simple form.

~Honey

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyalmost 19 years ago
A lil Sizzle to the fire~

Thoughtful...

I love your imagery here.

A lot said with so few words.

Great lil flow...

More Pleases~!!

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