Rock Bottom

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Disappointment, disaster
Happy ever after
Heartfelt laughter
What a joke you provoke

Game winning shot and you choke
It all ends with one stroke
Opportunity knocked

Your world was rocked
Love everlasting, what crock
Love yourself first

Give till it hurts
A lifetime cursed
The cycle must end

An unforgivable sin
Now I’ll never get in
Nothings right

I give up the fight

Trigger pulled Good-night
Trigger pulled Good-night
Trigger pulled goodnight.

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Lexiloo571Lexiloo571over 3 years ago

This how i feel .the pain i carry it never stops . The choices that make come from a place that is so dark . The peole i love i seem to hurt the most .i dont get it. I guess i get what i deserve. I worked really hard to get here. Always running from that place but running from place. I dont know how to tell any one to do it.

Jennifer CJennifer Calmost 19 years ago
Deep and Dark

I like it! Felt the

frustration and the

sorrow. Another

craking piece of poetry.

Love your work.

Thank you.~ J