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Saltwater Revival

bysandspike©

life's irregular beat
crashing high...
              then low
rhapsody with an ebb
voyage of light and darkness
constant beat of the winds
blowing us away and back

release your sins in the salt
partner of tequila and redemption
crests of hope and salvation
between troughs of darkness

Join the twelve fisherman
revival by the sea
undertow sweeps us out
faith floats us back

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