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Click hereHot days ... Hotter nights
Will the heat come to an end?
Mid summer day, scorching.
Heat waves ... All around.
Cooking bodies, slick with
sweat. For some relief,
we go dipping in the creek.
Frolicking frenzy.
Cascading sheets,
of cool mountain water.
Splashing ... Giggles
Everything drenched,
My lover ... Me
Leave me my nights,
of cool satin sheets.
Heating them up, sliding all over.
Pink body blushes, tingle.
Red wine flows satiny smooth.
Dripping, down our bodies.
Eager, thirsty mouths
... schmoozing
Lightening strokes, spreading.
Liquid molten folds, seeping.
Limber bodies curling into one,
upon cool satin sheets ...
nice word painting, one is placed right into the scene rather vividly. Effective!
Lghtening strokes? lightning strikes, and cascades of wine as the satin sheets entwine. i generally stray away from convention when I write (at least, my perceptions of convention). still, i really liked the word and image play, here.