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- saturday night
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Click hereit's gonna be loud
and cold, a pale
beer in a green
bottle necked kiss
to suck on slow
ignoring the others
standing in line
behind the befores
ahead of the afters
waitin' for a now
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cherries_on_snowalmost 18 years agoLoved this
Like a delicious draw, short enough to be still cold and long enough to satisfy. Thank you laelia.
YDDalmost 20 years agoThose were the days. . .
A succinct Saturday
nicely done
Most can learn from this one.
annaswirlsalmost 20 years agointo another sunday morning
perfection.
I think I have been in that line too.
