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Click hereI love your big Mick Jagger lip,
your saddest eye. I even loved you
when you got that ugly sty.
I never count the days
that piled up to now,
nor ever look ahead,
but welcome every moment
yet to mow us down
in glorious discordant harmony.
I even love you when you lie to me.
I've loved you, love you always,
even as I can't explain
how blind affection swallows pain.
We're naked strutting emperors,
our loopy foibles on parade,
cascading with the march of tears
that hail our reign of circumstance
for this is love, our passion true
was born of chance, but over time
made tangible. We've surpassed fear,
made mockery of mere romance.
Here two have come to grow
as twisted wildflowers do,
insisting through a sidewalk crack.
Our weedy strength is sustenance,
existing hard by splintered ties
that straggled north
along forgotten railway track.
I simply love you Terence,
always hear your song ring clear,
even when our music fails. I always
hold you near in every jaded day,
through every jangled night,
even when reason pales.
Didn't want to intervene in the love between you and your guy in PF&D. This is delightful.
Here's a big marshmallow peep for both of you!
(Glad that sty cleared up, Terry!)
Fly
how does this man named Terence with a big Mick Jagger lip handle all your love? I have to tell you, this poem speaks devotion to the nth degree. Simply unheard of...
Vixxx
I just love the way you write <grin>
so very much like wonder woman~
I meant a woman wondering <grin>
bows humble to a poetic grasshopper
kingdoms fall...because nothing can compare to the love of a beautiful woman.
Truly one of the best things you've ever written.
it's honest, tender, and exposes your vulnerability which is sexy as hell.
This Terence, he is a lucky man, no??
Thank you
The perfect line: "I love your big Mick Jagger lip"
The rest made me cry. Maybe it's pms. Maybe I'm a sap. Most likely because this was so real.
This seems so personal that to comment is almost an intrusion, so I'll 5 it and wimp off.