- Non-Erotic Poetry
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Click hereo, yes, that apologetic tone,
scented paper,
the red smear
of lipstick, as if brushed-over slights
gathered like crisp autumn leaves
for burning, for burning
does it really matter it was my hand cut
this proud figure down?
- COMMENTS
Epmd607about 10 years agowould be my obsessive need to find something to critique, that maybe the image isn't as perfectly fresh as the rest of the poem. 5/5, excellent work, poet.
Angelineabout 10 years agoReally evocative and filled with sense cues for the reader. I might move "cut" to the last line though you probably considered that and wanted more emphasis on that word...Anyway it's excellent. Thank you for the read.
