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Click hereObsidian crystal clasped tightly
cutting deep into the life line
of a tender palm.
Blood flows
birthing sparks and flame
Pele's breath pours into her soul.
Orange and yellow flicker
into her jet native world as
a shadow child of molted lava
pours forth her pain.
Engulfed in the past, her tears slide
from old eyes caught in youth.
Beauty lies within the black
Glass concieved
from cooled firey liquid
the soul of a sprite
trapped within.
Hands that carve
with a lusty heart
drumbeats of release
pour from the razor's edge
slicing away the past.
Pele dances within the starlight
of the glass that creates life
born from destruction.
The thunder rumbles in her soul.
( I was sitting here thinking about one of the girls I worked with at the treatment center in Utah. She was an unique soul and I worked hard to create a bond with her. She was a cutter. This disease is highly addictive and rarely noticed as an addiction. Just for a wee bit of history: Pele known, as “She who shapes the sacred land” is a Hawaiian Goddess who is both loved and feared. Pele, the goddess of fire, lightening, dance, volcanoes and violence embodies both the maiden and crone of the Triple Goddess. She is the embodiment of the Wild Woman who lives within each female soul. Pele is the lastest Goddess I embodied in my Celestial Diva Jewelry series. Her energy brought Holly to mind. I pray for Holly to this day as she battles the thunder that rumbles within her soul.)
Powerful poem about an awful disease. No matter how much she cuts, she can't slice awaay the past.
Enjoyed reading this on the forum and shame on me for not pointing out then, conceived and fiery spelling issue. Thanks for the end-note explanation you offer; saved me from a trip to Google!
http://forum.literotica.com:81/showthread.php?p=22330268#post22330268
By the way, I don't usually give 5s. I always feel like there's room for improvement. With your piece, I don't. Don't change a word (or punctuation for that matter).
I truely enjoy your mystical poetry (~_~) and the added note tells the tale that unfolded feelings and formed from your passionate pen. Nice!