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Click hereThe water runs over his body
like nymph's fingers,
cool and dispassionate
as weather. How different
would be my liquid flow
were I suddenly made rain.
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annaswirlsover 16 years ago~
I like a poem that gives me a slow smile and "ahhhh" at the end. This did both.
jthserraover 16 years agoVery nice
I really liked the phrasing, it made the metaphor fresh and invigorating. Well done.
