Sleepless Without Him

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Ethereal moonlight fingers, take my hand
          and lead me through buried time;
          hold me in the darkness of his love.

He has offered me a cup of champagne tears
which wrests my soul from winter moorings;
He carries me to the brink of eternity and beyond,
pleading “Come, come away with me
and feel what only dreams can bring.”

Wait with me, your golden unfeeling night-fingers caressing;
I want to feel the whirling, spinning ecstasy of poppy afternoons
covered with the robe of amber-glass twilight,
and live within the evening air.

I cannot think, I cannot dream –
I want to take and sip the crimson sunset…
but the moonlight is quicksilver,
slipping away from my trembling hand,
sliding down my melting body beneath silken sheets;
in the warm hollow left by his body
          I sleep.


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fawniefawniealmost 20 years ago
i really love your poetry

"i want to take and sip the crimson sunset..."

what a wonderful line..what a wonderful, although very sad poem. i could relate.. nice nice nice!

tarablackwood22tarablackwood22almost 20 years ago
Hey...

....girl, I like your style! You and I travel the same highways. Some terrific phrasing here, well beyond good in spots.

TathagataTathagataalmost 20 years ago
Almost

too much....but it wasn't.

what great images:

I cannot think, I cannot dream ?

I want to take and sip the crimson sunset?

but the moonlight is quicksilver,

slipping away from my trembling hand,

sliding down my melting body beneath silken sheets;

in the warm hollow left by his body

I sleep.

that is beautiful writing.

I'm impressed

Thank you

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