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Click hereA ficus grows
between the lights
and lithograph.
I know this.
Here in stillness,
waiting for your call,
a new leaf unfolds.
copyright d. dixon
originally posted on literotica 5.26.05
a plagiarized copy of slow minutes (plagiarized by H. L. in 2007) is possibly still online.
Everything centres around the new leaf unfolding loved that well done
This has an almost oriental feel to it. "[B]etween the lights / and lithograph" are good lines--descriptive, though not overly so. I don't so much care for the line "I know this", though, but, hey--just my opinion.<p>
Not you at your best, but not bad. I liked it.
how minutes sometimes feel like hours and hours can become days. Time is a weird thing isn't it?
This is an excellent example of how waiting can feel.
Sometimes, like watching paint dry.
You do so much with so few words, you are such a wonderful poet.