tagErotic Poetryso many things

so many things

byjack30341©

you are so many things
to me my young man
so smart so athletic
so never ever bland

whenever we talk
you say the right words
you now make me notice
such rich new rewards

you are so many things
does your girl understand
you're different, you're real
you are a deep man

your eyes they can penetrate
whether its my soul
a thin new blouse
or an unspoken goal

you are so many things
and i think you can tell
now i notice your look
notice your smell

my smile must be different
because yours is too
these feelings are so weird
so awful so blue

you are so many things
smart enough to know
that i have now changed
and that i want it to show

a weekend away
is what i will do
drive to a nearby city
not that far from you

you are so many things
tall solid and strong
restless like me
and wondering for long?

i took my chance
told you my plans
listened amazed
you said its all in your hands

you are so many things
such a man that i see
i've wondered too
if that weekend you'll have me

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