- Erotic Poetry
- Sparring
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let us meet
like men
on the finest
of fields:
here in the center
of Her,
swords drawn
eye to eye,
in this heated
battle,
grinning
as the valleys
we stand astride
flood
with our
exertions.
- COMMENTS
UnderYourSpellover 16 years agoI don't think anyone is sheathing! Not if her valleys are being flooded!
LeBrozover 16 years agoClever. A battle to the death with swords drawn in this ménage à trois? The victor sheaths his sword first? The fun with this piece is drawn by the reader in his own mind.
Angelineover 16 years agoErotic in an understated way. It gets the point across, Swordfight indeed! Your poem will be recommended in the new poems review on the Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum. Thanks for the read! :)
