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to float my boat
don't hesitate
to help yourself
to hyperventilate
your hyper venom hate
and blow that lid
to blow that burning soot
out of your lungs
so I can linger
to lick you up
without that sour
aftertaste
right here
where and when
demanded
to rock my world
don't hesitate
to slap my face
with a palpable palm
and wrap your calm
in form of arms
around this man shape
cactus thorny
carelessly horny
overloaded oddity
dazzled down
I'm easily
commanded
that's a violently sexy little poem you wrote there pal. These sprees of yours together make a book--a good one. You do know that, right?
Ok one nitpick. Might be my ear, but this sounded rhythmically off enough to make me stop reading and say "huh?"--
and wrap your calm
in form of arms
around this man shape
cactus thorny
carelessly horny
overloaded oddity
I'd do this (just a suggestion....)
and wrap your calm
inform of arms
around this man shaped
cactus thorny
careless horny
overloaded oddity
(Note that I did a "Rybka" to "inform" hehe.) Anyway, you know I love these word sprees you skid onto your computer. :)