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- COMMENTS
KillerRomanceover 15 years agoReally liked it. Witty, too. Great start to a morning for me!(: <3, Lillian.
duddle146over 17 years agoThe trees whisper of the past, sharing secrets - lovely rendering and an illustration of the forest ~ so dark and deep.
Man Rayover 17 years agoAuthorI’m pleased that you enjoyed the poem. Thanks for your kind comments.
forest_femmeover 17 years agoCalls to mind, "If a fish and a bird fall in love, where will they make their nest?"
wildsweetoneover 17 years agothat's why i love this place. i learn something new every day. *off to check out wikidoodle now* thank you!
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Man Rayover 17 years agoAuthorI am flattered that you visited the poem, read it and made time to offer your comments. Thank you! Perhaps to best understand my 'poetic licence/choice' of weeping willow and mourning, Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia might explain it better than I. I have always fancied a 'weeping willow' and the moaning cooOOoo-coo-coo-coo of a 'mourning dove' so juxtaposing the two seemed appealing.
I might as well cast my vote now :-)
Man Ray
