still life on stairwell

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Part 2 of the 2 part series

Updated 03/16/2021
Created 01/26/2004
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Cordelia
Cordelia
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He placed the roses down with so much care,
their breath became the sunlight, fading green,
which left a tender shadow on the stair,

and gave a final stroke of tourmaline
to soft, forgotten petals, velvet white –
whose breath became as sunlight, faded green.

I pause to mourn – no fragrance reunites
me, in my bitter tea-stained reverie,
with those forgotten petals, velvet white.

I know that future’s roses, meant for me,
won’t keep that heart of green and drip with tears.
I slip back into tea-stained reverie.

He walks away in ashen atmospheres,
the light shrinks from those blossoms, now sad gray
No longer white and green, they drip with tears.

The wilted stems and ribbons swept away,
where once he’d placed those roses with such care
the light shrinks from the blossoms, sad and gray,
and leaves no trace of shadow on the stair.

Cordelia
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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Yawn

Yawn

HomerPindarHomerPindarabout 20 years ago
uhhhhh

(the sound of me trying to speak with my jaw still resting on the floor.) DAMN, Cord :) well done

jthserrajthserraabout 20 years ago
Wow...

Simply stunning, a terzanelle in iambic pentameter, with an unobtrusive rhyme. An excellent handling of the form, with a bittersweet beautiful poem. My favorite of the day...

jim : )

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