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Stream of Consciousness

bygreenmountaineer©

Note to self, lunch tomorrow, Susan, Harriet, 11:30, no dessert, A&P, hurry, hurry, meat or fish? Trader Joe's coffee beans, BJ's Wholesale fruits on sale, buy two pounds, get one free, funny name that BJ's is, home by three, soccer practice, Heather's done 5:00 o'clock, 5:15 she may have said, doesn't matter, chicken fingers, pot roast Harry, Heather needs permission slip, note for Kathy, sick today, class trip to the Met tomorrow, diorama France, I think, cavemen artists painting bulls, note to self, buy some paint, Heather's room, don't slight Kathy,

"Ooh Baby Baby

you feel so big"

have to turn the dryer on, pink, I think, they both like pink, Harry needs to lose some weight, time for news at eleven

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by Cleardaynow07/09/14

Worried

Very nice and telling idea indeed and I think the items on her list were excellent. As Oldbear says, I have no idea if this tallies with how they do think but it does seem credible with the emphasis onmore...

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by Oldbear6307/08/14

Excellent GM

Really enjoyed this, like Todd - took me a minute. Funny thing - been having an offline conversation with another Lit poet about male voice - female voice and tried to put myself in a womans head (more...

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by greenmountaineer07/08/14

I took me a while to digest your comment, 1201. That particular blind spot is called pride of authorship, but you're right. In fact, "news at eleven" is quite a logjam, given how definitive it is.

Lookmore...

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by todski2807/06/14

interesting take 1201

I was wondering what the hell was going on, till the

"Ooh Baby Baby

you feel so big"


then it put me inside the mind of a woman having boring mandatory sex, ticking off items and lists going throughmore...

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by twelveoone07/06/14

think about "stream"

the action of water over rocks, the so-called meandering, the action against the banks, it is all fluid dynamics...
however a stream has a beginning and "works" to an end or a destination...
for the firstmore...

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