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Click hereTied to the bed
You leave me there
Alone to think
Of what we’re doing
I know I’m safe
It’s part of the game
And I want to be
Entirely yours
You come in
Looking at me
I can see in your eyes
You’re nervous too
You kiss me hard
Make me be silent
And then you begin
Devouring me
This poem needs more show and less tell. Describing how your body physically reacts to being left alone & tied up would carry so much more poetry. Let your audience feel what you feel.
What should be intense again sounds so clinical, almost like a factual report, devoid of feeling.