tagNon-Erotic PoetrySun on your back

Sun on your back

bydemure101©

Sun on your back, and the haze
of high summer, like smiles,
long, drowsy days to bask in,

starry-eyed, laughing
all through youth's ruse, blithely,
ere time's up – only tomorrow

you will wake to find
leaves strewn on the path
and the branches dripping.

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by DawnJ11/24/12

"Weeping..."

"...may endure for a night, but joy comes in the morning." Your poem somehow reminded me of this verse from the Bible. "Everything old is new again", and the seasons are renewed...therein lies hope!more...

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by tazz31711/13/12

HEY D.....THIS ONE IS GOOD SONG MATERIAL

listen to Neil Diamonds...Hot August Night.....this could be your break through to a musical career.....TK U MLJ LV NV

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by SweetOblivion11/13/12

Clever as ever

Good rhyming and timing too. Sweet O.

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