- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Surreal Dreaming
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Last night I saw a picture
Floating in my head
Iniside this little picture
A funny thing was said.
It told me not to worry
And to think of better days
To think of things like buttercups
Shining with strawberry glaze
And while I knew that I was dreaming
That it simply wasn't real
This feeling just washed over me
It all seems so surreal.
But pictures can not talk to me
And buttercups don't have glaze
But still it made me smile
And think of better days.
(Annoying the rhythm is broken in line eight, as Lit wont accept the abbreviation I put into strawberry. So if you try and make it work then please do! Thanks - Kiz)
- COMMENTS
wildsweetonealmost 17 years agoi mentioned this submission in the New Poem Review thread in the Poetry Forum. - wildsweetone (the 50% rating is so that it does not affect future temp ratings).
