tagErotic PoetrySweet obscurity

Sweet obscurity

byQueenelizabeth©

Warm is the flesh of her creases
To which his tongue most beseeches.

To be lost in the the line
Of her V
Divine in his sweet
Obscurity

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by Oldbear6310/09/13

...in his sweet obsurity

An amazing line. When I get so absorbed in pleasuring my lover, her taste, her smell, her movements - yes that is how it is.

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by Queenelizabeth10/08/13

Thank you

I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for taking the time to comment. Your feedback is much appreciated.

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by oneiria10/08/13

Very nice.

I really liked this poem in terms of its brevity, its unusual imagery and use of language.

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