Sweet Torment

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Teasing
Tickles
Feathers
Tongues
Kisses
Tantalizing touches
Teasing me
Brings me to the edge

How long can I take
The deliberate
Sweet torment
Kisses on my neck
Lips on my legs

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BSwett060BSwett060over 6 years ago
Sweet Torment, indeed!

Very expressive, love the build up, the anticipation. Nicely done!

tazz317tazz317over 8 years ago
PLEASURE OR PAIN

bring on the rain. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
sensual

Hey I like tour poem and share your fantasy.

Arrow0830Arrow0830almost 10 years ago

MMMMMMM very nice :)

Paul25Paul25about 11 years ago
You

I'd love to be able to provide this kind of pleasure to you. That's part of who I am, what I feel.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Thank you

Teasing me... brings me to the edge......

dblofivedblofivealmost 12 years ago
Not so sure

While I do like the visual of lips on your legs, I don't know if I liked this. It just seemed to end to abruptly for me. But that's just my preference.

kevin1234kevin1234about 12 years ago
sub love

your work is amazing

western_firemanwestern_firemanabout 12 years ago
Tease

Mistress, Would I be allowed to tease you?

PaulBlartPaulBlartabout 12 years ago

I long to tease and be teased. To push and to be pushed to the point where you must have more. Driven by desire alone.

paulthewetcdpaulthewetcdabout 12 years ago
This poem...

...is just the beginning!

Jaden_cyberJaden_cyberover 12 years ago
merging

tongue drawing circles,

triggering waves of sensation to your core.

Till two bodies melts.

Sun Tan GuySun Tan Guyover 12 years ago
Very sweet and erotic

Oh I would make you wait and wait. and beg for more... over and over to.. very nice.. like it too.. the sub side of you is very intrigueing.. love a switch though..

STG

kneedeep98kneedeep98over 12 years ago
Great

The poem describes seduction at it's finest.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
on the edge of 4 into 5

knowing for a fact this is the fist poem the woman has written in forty years, coupled with the nice near-rhyme of the last verses of each "stanza", a "4" for having attempted a poem at all after so many years eased overly easily into a "5" for the near-rhymes. unless this is "beginner's luck", the author shows potential.

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