- Erotic Poetry
- The Big Bang
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How nice it would be
to lie with you on my white sofa, only a tree
or two
peeking through
the bay window. Your palms find my triceps,
my lips nudge your neck.
Pale sky blue goes twilight
as your tongue sets,
and in the sacred night
we unfold, orbit, meet.
The part
of you that was a star
bursts
in my nuclear furnace.
For a fleeting instant we become
one.
- COMMENTS
LeBrozover 16 years agoSuch a very fine poem without becoming either crude or sappy; sets up great imagery. I only have a small problem with the last 3 words; probably a consequence of reading so many really bad poems where couples entwine, meld, merge, and become one. Hmmmm - we coalesce ? Only thought of that word thanks to your stellar imagery.
Angelineover 16 years agoso go figure. :D
Another lovely poem from you although I liked your Walking in Alberta better. I wonder if I've read you before the past few weeks. Your writing seems familiar to me (and I really like it lol). Maybe we just have similar styles. :)
champagne1982over 16 years agoThis is a good poem I think could be made better if you dropped the first strophe completely. (Others more schooled may think differently, but this is just my opinion.)
