tagNon-Erotic Poetrythe Colour of Consciousness

the Colour of Consciousness

byAshesh9©

what is the colour of consciousness ?
where is the Center of the universe ?
to an Enlightened Seer this is True Wisdom
to Mr.know-it-all simply substandard verse
steeped in Judeo-abrahamic tradition
locked up behind High walls of subconscious
self-created mental asylum institution
anythin' not understood by familiar culture
is immediately labelled " Substandard"
such intolerance , ignorance , bigotry
by self-certfied Nobel winnin' Literotic bard !?!?

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by twelveoone08/25/13
by Ashesh908/23/13

Harry , Yogis claim it is Absolutely

Colourless or Transparent !

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by sexycharlene08/23/13

goody!

I never got struck on the head...

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by HarryHill08/23/13

for me it's always been blue,

fading to bright purple when being struck on the head.. what is E talking about?

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by erectus12308/23/13

Bob Zimmerman

is Bob Dylan who adopted Dylan Thomas's first name

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