- Non-Erotic Poetry
- The Invisible Woman
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It seems the only reasonable thing to do is
move back home. To fuck bayou boys and
work in human resources. I tried it all here.
A mouthful of chocolate mint condom gives
one time to think. All I wanted was for him
to have put it in. This chapter has come to
a humiliating end. He told me to be safe. At
least at home there is someone to touch.
- COMMENTS
todski28over 9 years agoInterwoven beautifully
You controlled the readers attention on "safe" before putting the word in the piece. To me that imprinting is t he sign of great writing. I 5ed
greenmountaineerover 9 years agoI liked the incongruence of human resources with all of its equal opportunity employment rules and regulations and coupling with bayou boys. The way you turned the image of a latex condom from safe sex to a "plastic" relationship, in as few words as you did, is outstanding writing IMO.
