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Click hereOn my knees there I am with baited breath I still wait.
With nothing to wear but my smile and my chain.
Waiting for the time for you to arrive,
Won't you please come home soon,
with out your love I will die.
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Neverover 17 years agoFYI
I believe it's "bated breath."
The last line is a tad melodramatic. I'd stretch the poem out a bit; give us a feel for the passing of time and the rising anticipation the narrator is experiencing.
