- Non-Erotic Poetry
- The Tapestry Hangs Before Me
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Click hereTHE TAPESTRY HANGS BEFORE ME
when i look
at the words
woven in the fabric,
love stands out.
but see,
it needs a place
where comfort resides-
a poetic declaration
threaded out of life.
tragedies of yesteryear
become explorations
written in metaphor.
sometimes understanding
is all it takes.
there is strength,
a caricature-
omnipotent and alive.
it needs you
and the work
will be complete.
- COMMENTS
sackalmost 19 years agoYou might want to substitute "yesterday" for "yesteryear". The latter word seems a bit out of place and time in this poem.
ferociouskittycatover 19 years agoNow all I need to do is learn how to do one so well ;-)
Great job hon. >^..^<
sandspikeover 19 years agoThis work is smooth and rich and feels good as it touches
you. Nice call blackwood.
jd4georgeover 19 years ago...written in understanding? Why is it, that the ones we love always seem to speak in metaphors? Nice read, DC!
