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Click hereAnd if I dare to dream
Who'll catch me if I fall?
Will you be there
or others past,
their promises still in my purse?
And if I dare
How shall I wake
troubled,alone or scared?
If but it were
that I could dream
If only that I dared
It reads well, but I question the use of the 'question marks' in that particular use. Technically I think they maybe misplaced but without them at all would have been even better, being that its a poem and not a story. Otherwise, well done.