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Click here While running through a field one day, a lad just barely ten;
Fighting wars with knights of old, and winning all of them.
I’d run and run from here to there, and then run back again;
A hole in my pants, a scrape on my knee, I never had to care.
While running through a field one day, a young man in my teens;
Riding bikes and baseball games, I’ll always have time to play.
I’d still run from here to there, and then run back again;
A broken arm, a bullies charm, I had no time to care.
While walking through a field one day, a man who’s grown so tall;
Working hard and living life, and making time to play.
I don’t run from here to there, and then run back again;
I get there now by walking tall, and making believe I care.
While walking through a field one day, an old man now, and gray;
All alone, just by myself, now just too old to play.
I don’t run from here to there, I’d never get back again,
I sit and think of days gone by, and how it hurts to care.
And while lying in a field one day, covered with morning dew;
The tears that are now shed for me are very, very few.
My spirit runs from here to there, and then runs back again;
My soul now knows what it all meant, and it’s just too late to care.
A belated Welcome to Lit with your first submission and an excellent one at that; it deserves mention in the New Poems Review in the PF&D forum.
I like the fact that you are thinking in a progression. Two lines at the end of each stanza to do this is overkill, the other problems are it is cliched and drifting in and out of end rhyme.