To Care

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     While running through a field one day, a lad just barely ten;
     Fighting wars with knights of old, and winning all of them.
        I’d run and run from here to there, and then run back again;
       A hole in my pants, a scrape on my knee, I never had to care.


      While running through a field one day, a young man in my teens;
     Riding bikes and baseball games, I’ll always have time to play.
         I’d still run from here to there, and then run back again;
         A broken arm, a bullies charm, I had no time to care.


     While walking through a field one day, a man who’s grown so tall;
Working hard and living life, and making time to play.
     I don’t run from here to there, and then run back again;
         I get there now by walking tall, and making believe I care.


While walking through a field one day, an old man now, and gray;
      All alone, just by myself, now just too old to play.
           I don’t run from here to there, I’d never get back again,
          I sit and think of days gone by, and how it hurts to care.


      And while lying in a field one day, covered with morning dew;
     The tears that are now shed for me are very, very few.
  My spirit runs from here to there, and then runs back again;
          My soul now knows what it all meant, and it’s just too late to care.

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LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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A belated Welcome to Lit with your first submission and an excellent one at that; it deserves mention in the New Poems Review in the PF&D forum.

twelveoonetwelveooneover 16 years ago
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I like the fact that you are thinking in a progression. Two lines at the end of each stanza to do this is overkill, the other problems are it is cliched and drifting in and out of end rhyme.

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