Too Old

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Everything that she thinks is hot
I’m not.
Things that she thinks look sexy or cute
Don’t suit.
She’ll start a fire or freeze me with the tone of her voice,
her choice.
In my dreams we walk, talk, and love, care, share, and hold,
too old.
I’ll never see that look in her beautiful eyes
Deep sighs.

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lovekinglovekingover 10 years ago
Like minds

We seem to be lamenting the passing of youth. Dreaming of what used to be but will never be again.

tazz317tazz317over 10 years ago
#2 REMEMBERING WHAT WAS

or the old fashioned That Was What Happened and I am bragging, TK U MLJ LV NV

tazz317tazz317over 10 years ago
IS THIS AN ODE ON A TOMBSTONE

or one in sorrow and all alone, TK U MLJ LV NV

LesseloovesPeterLesseloovesPeterover 10 years ago

Clever rhyme scheme, like this one!

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