Train Ride

bydemure101©

(Sorry, guys...)

It’s better that you shouldn’t try and break
the ride’s monotony and poke your head
out of the window since you want to take
a closer look: Each
               sin-
               gle
               te-
               le-
               graph-
               pole
               hurtth
               like
               mad
               and
Outthj! That wath the wortht encounter
that you ever had!

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by DawnJ09/23/12

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!

Painful, but damned funny for all that! Thanks for the laugh, Demure!

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by tazz31709/22/12

FOR WHACH IZ RITTEN ON POLES

going past like picket fence, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Ashesh909/22/12

The poem is written in the shape of

A railway signal ?! Wow ! That's innovative !!

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