- Non-Erotic Poetry
- travel
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i must have planed
since i deplaned
it's as plain as that the day
went by too fast and deprived
me of my standard dose
of california tan
thus i had to plane again
a stranger follows me
through the airports and on the planes
glances at me
from the flat glass plates
which stick to the scattered walls
when i reach my place of birth
the face in the mirror'll be mine
wh ©
1990 nov-dec
2005 jan
- COMMENTS
Reltneover 19 years agoI like the "planed"
"deplaned"
"plain"
play
and the pale stranger in reflection is nicely done.
However, I do not feel that the final two lines are up to your normal standard. Stating that it is a mirrored image makes everything too obvious, and "mirror'll" is just not you!
