- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Twilight Walk
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I slip over a shrub
Grateful for its naked arms
Pleasure marks over my back.
II
I eardrop the top trees
Playing hide and seek
Giggles and whistles all over my head.
III
To the slipping sun
I raise my hands
Catching a floating sliver.
- COMMENTS
twelveooneabout 16 years agoeardrop the top trees, a little too strange for me. I found it hard to get any kind of a fix on this.
darkerdreamerabout 16 years ago"I eardrop the top trees" because I expected it to be 'treetops' and it wasn't, which made it all the better. I like your recent (and not so recent) experiments with playing the unexpected card, I think that suit fits you well.
UnderYourSpellabout 16 years agoThe penny just dropped with 'eardrop' and all became crystal clear about the whispers in the trees. You are certainly making my brain wakeup and get into gear!
WickedEveabout 16 years agoNice poem, Kolkore. I'd change "over" in this line "Pleasure marks over my back" to "on" since you use the word twice in part 1 and again in part 2. Not sure about "I eardrop the top trees" but it sounds interesting. Thanks for the read.
