- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Unclear (Anag.)
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Click hereShe sells seashore in the Seychelles;
his name looks good on the
spines of his books;
they are usually away at school
--absence not presence;
their house is a hive of activity but
not a hive.
- COMMENTS
buttersalmost 13 years agohow things are as to how things, perhaps, ought to be - or at least how we expect them to be. a bustling hive of activity that lacks the true cohesion of 'the hive'. an adroit observation and social comment. didn't particularly 'get' me, though, in any emotional context. that might be my failing, not yours.
Maria2394almost 13 years agoI like the ambiguity in this piece. It is a frenzy of activity and I enjoyed the images I got from this one. well done
~ maria
