- Erotic Poetry
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Click hereThis morning
I was searching for
the young lustful boy
who seeks seduction
and i thought I could
not find him
in your masterful touch
your commanding hands
that do not need instruction
but then I realized
that I see him
every time
my tongue touches
your softness and
my mouth surrounds you
There he is
in your vulnerability
as you surrender to me
- COMMENTS
PrisonTeacherabout 15 years agoThis I liked a good deal. Woman seeks the virgin youth in her seasoned man, thinks he is gone, but rediscovers him in her lover's vitality and their interaction.
Good work! I favorited it.
GuiltyPleasureabout 15 years agoI think this has great possibilities in the way you treat your theme but it's almost hidden by too many words. If you could simplify your poem it would sing.<P>
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