- Non-Erotic Poetry
- [venetian...]
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venetian blind
stops the sun
cajun music
flows from PC
at night
sprinklers
overshoot
onto sidewalks
overhead
claustrophobic sky
stars
drown in pollution
a street light
in the puddle
under my feet
winks
at me?
i wink back
wh
2006-10-17
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 17 years agoVery nice. I too am often confused about the response and and lack of response to my poems. As you say 'It's interesting.'
Senna Jawaover 17 years agoAuthorThank you, vamp, for your kind comment. Of my recent poems, this one somehow has the least reads number and rating, I don't know why. It's fine. It's always interesting.
Anonymousover 17 years agoguru. A great poem packed with layers of meaning, your imagery is deft as ever and its mentioned in today's new poem review.
