- Non-Erotic Poetry
- waiting for absolution
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Click heresitting on her suitcase by the side of the highway
she crosses one long leg over the other
letting her beat up sandal drip from her tiny foot
she takes a long drag from her cigarette
and lets the smoke pour lazily from her mouth
as the cars speed by she waits patiently
for a ride or absolution
whichever gets there faster
- COMMENTS
BlueskyBeautyalmost 20 years agoit didn't take many words to write much!
i really enjoyed the feel of this. ty
WickedEvealmost 20 years agoAs I was reading this, I was anxious for it to have an ending that would leave me satisfied. I could just feel this poem building to a substantial ending, and it wasn't a let down.
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Syndra Lynnalmost 20 years agoI love the shoe dripping from her tiny foot. Wonderful images here.
minsuealmost 20 years agoThe style is not one of my favorites as I tend to prefer punctuation, but the substance was wonderful. I could see the scene perfectly. Well done.
